proszę o sprawdzenie i ewentualne poprawki PILNE DAM 6666 CHRISTMAS ARE BEGUN TWENTY FIVE DECEMBER.IT ALLADING FAMILES FIRE TIME;WHEN FIRST STAR EATS IN ON SKY OF PRESENTATION UNDER CHRISTMAS.TREE APPEAR WAIT AND IT EATS CVHILDREN WAIT OPEN. PEOPLE ISSUE MASS OF MONEY ON FESTIVE DEKORATIONS.IT IS ON CHRISTMAS TREE BEAUTIFUL GLASS BALLS A LOT AND STAR BEAUTIFUL.PRESENTS BUING GIFTS TO CHILDREN ALTNOUGHT CHILDREN THINK THAT SANTA CLAUS.CHILDREN DRESS UP WARM AND ENJOY

althought zastąp but. Zamiast Presents powinno być parents. Wykreśl in przed on i po on napisz the. Nie rozumiem tego zdania "TREE APPEAR WAIT AND IT EATS CVHILDREN WAIT OPEN". Coś chyba namieszałeś.

Daj to: people give a lot of money on decorations, zamiast tego :PEOPLE ISSUE MASS OF MONEY ON FESTIVE DEKORATIONS.

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